I think you did an amazing job at describing events that were happening in the book but I think you could improve on the description of Peter. Who is he? Who did he like? Who did he bond with? These are points you could have pondered when writting about him. Other than that amazing job.
I agree with Kaylee. I think this is really good but you could have included what Lucys imagination was from or why peter and his siblings were so frustrated with her. Other then that i really like it!
I think you did an amazing job at describing events that were happening in the book but I think you could improve on the description of Peter. Who is he? Who did he like? Who did he bond with? These are points you could have pondered when writting about him. Other than that amazing job.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kaylee. I think this is really good but you could have included what Lucys imagination was from or why peter and his siblings were so frustrated with her. Other then that i really like it!
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